2nd Draft: Decisions and Revisions

After discussing my work with different people I already have a list of what things I should try and maybe change. Class critique was very helpful, since it showed me my strong sides and where I should improve. Now I actually tried to change some details and get better results.

My cover:

I have moved some cover lines, as well as I have changed the color of the outline, which is now pink. I also have edited the main image, and blurred the background a little, which makes it now dim.

My Table of Contents:

I have changed the colors for my gradient, which used to be light pink and dark green, to light green with dark green. I have gotten some comments saying that light pink was a little too bright, and was not really going in a gradient with dark green. Therefore I have changed it to light green, which in my opinion, made it look so much better.

My Double Page Spread:

Here I have changed some things such as adding frames to some images to add extra detail, put the quotes in bold, as well as adding extra color to my title and first words of paragraph start.